Acid End

[SandForGaara]

Acid end

 

Fading colors of my nails and flesh.

Repeating moments of your agony.

Will you paint my mind again.

Or stand alone , next to the mute...(mute)

 

For what you care is what I want.

Don't you get it.

It's all because of you...Shut up!

Stop crying...

I lose it every time you say a word.

Stay calm!

All of this will end with acid...

 

Fading colors of my nails and flesh.

Repeating moments of your agony.

Will you paint my mind again.

Or stand alone , next to the mute...(mutey)

 

I will not stop to desolate my veins.

Keep it bleeding!

As long as you keep your feelings maimed

Go away!

Lost again in self-affliction.

Come out!

Everything will end with acid...

 

Fading colors of my nails and flesh.

Repeating moments of your agony.

Will you paint my mind again.

Or stand alone , next to the mute...(mute)

 

For what you care is what I want.

Don't you get it.(maimed)

It's all because of you...Shut up!

Stop crying...(agony)

I lose it every time you say a word.

Stay calm!(hate)

All of this will end with acid...

(mute...)*fade*

[SandForGaara]

Някой друг коментар няма да ме натажи Само да кажа , навсякаде кадето има mute от начало беше vanity(т.е. "Will you paint my mind again,or sand next to your vanity") и повече ми харесваше

Edited May 17, 2009 by SandForGaara

[Supersonic Bitch]

Аз ще кажа само,че много бих искала някой ден да го чуя това на живо с подходяща музика и си представям здрави провиквания в скобичките На мене много ми харесва този текст Продължавай да пишеш в този дух!

[SandForGaara]

mersi

[hand_of_doom]

Не че ще повлияе особено на римата но ми се струва, че с vanity звучи по-добре (без да съм проверявал точните значенияна думите). Иначе доста приличен текст (не съм задълбавал съвсем де ). Продължавайте в същия дух, успех!

[SandForGaara]

И аз го харесвам повече с vanity(пустощ,празнота)