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Реших да споделя някои мои неща... Не мога да ги нарека текстове, а по-скоро идеи/рими (поеми??). Не бих казала, че са особено дълбокомислени, по-скоро изразяват как съм се чувствала в определени моменти.

Повечето нямат заглавия за момента:

 

1.

 

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Feed your greed with my sins

Sprinkle salt in my wounds

Why can't you just break me

Break me...

 

Sink your teeth in my flesh

Push me over the edge

Drain away all my blood

Stuff my veins with your dirt

 

I fly so high [You rip my wings off]

I die every night [You smile and stab me]

I cry on my knees [You spit in my face]

But there's no one who can save me

[Nobody wants to] Save me!

 

Blame me for your mistakes

Throw my effort in vain

Why won't you just waste me

Waste me...

 

Crush my bones with your fists

Steal the air that I breathe

Pour your stench down on me

Come on pour it all over me

 

 

^ Признавам, това го писах с мелодията на Man In The Box на Alice In Chains в главата ми :D

 

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2.

 

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Even though I see the gun that points at my head

Seems like my course's set and there is no other way

Bullet flying swiftly towards me in slow-mo

I can see it coming, ain't no chance to avoid

Sit back and enjoy.

 

Gradually sliding deeper inside my pit

You rip my heart out of my chest but who gives a shit

I bite my tongue and bend my head hoping you approve

Should I change my mood to be more convenient to you

 

Once again I end up stunned by your insight

Your divine light burns my eyes

And all my effort won't ever be enough

 

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3.

 

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These feelings invading my heart like a plague

I wish I could manage to push them away

The darkness is creeping demanding my thoughts

I'm falling in deeper unable to stop

 

This vortex of struggle and pain in my heart

Will drain me away, it will tear me apart

Despair has stricken its fangs in my mind

I long to escape but there is no way out

 

I wake up from slumber feeling regret

I wish I could find some way to forget

The poisonous memories filling my head

Moments, once happy now I came to dread

 

Bound by the chains of my own haunting dreams

My mind is a prison, it's too hard to breathe

There's no place to go and nothing to change

And all that is left is to wait 'till all fades

 

^ Това го писах в един по-тежък период от живота ми... В последствие се превърна в текст на една от песните на групата в която пея.

 

 

Имам още доста, но смятам че това е достатъчно за момента. Предварително се извинявам за възможните граматически грешки - не съм от англо-говоряща страна и не претендирам, че знам английски език перфектно.

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Bullet flying swiftly towards me in slow-mo

I can see it coming, ain't no chance to avoid

Sit back and enjoy.

 

Gradually sliding deeper inside my pit

You rip my heart out of my chest but who gives a shit

I bite my tongue and bend my head hoping you approve

Should I change my mood to be more convenient to you

... ..

 

This vortex of struggle and pain in my heart

Will drain me away, it will tear me apart

Despair has stricken its fangs in my mind

I long to escape but there is no way out

... ..

 

Bound by the chains of my own haunting dreams

My mind is a prison, it's too hard to breathe

There's no place to go and nothing to change

And all that is left is to wait 'till all fades

 

... ..

 

Това бяха най-добрите неща от текстовете ,поне според мен

Има идея и то Голяма ,малко още трябва да се развият и ще станат перфектни

 

ПП. нямам забележки за английския ти :punk_guitar:

 

Успех ,Дона :D

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